Monday, April 04, 2011

Day 3 - Cold & Numb

There IS no title for this one as I had a hard time with this one today and finally . . . well not exactly gave up but was pretty tempted. The words are SORTA depressing but the tune I came up with is completely the opposite and that's what I was going for. Inspiration, my sister calls me a dork, was walking to work in the rain and the poor circulation in my fingers . . . that's what it says. ha.

Verse 1 - Fingers cold and numb
these rainy days are not uncommon ones
grey and windy still
so predictable but I love (it or you) still
no sensation in my toes
but I'm not one of those
those who waver on a thin line

Chorus - Rain . . . don't give up on me 
I wont give up on you 
Rain . . .  you drenched me in your love 
you keeping my company is more than enough

verse 2 - Series of unfortunate events
have brought me back to you 
things I can't explain
things I can't undo
where does one go 
to get away form everything they know   ( i dunno about that line)

(repeat chorus)

instrument bridge

(chorus)

END!

can you tell I'm not happy with this one?

edit: I'm much more happy with this now that I've played it out and recorded it!