Friday, April 15, 2011

Day 14 - Oh Mr. Sun

Hmm I wonder oh I wonder what this is about. I actually had Hey Ocean's Alleyways stuck in my head at the time but the melody veered away from that song then sorta started to sound like another song I had written . . . so I dunno where there melody with this one is gonna go.
The first line came to me while I was walking home (no really?? yea really. SHOCKING!)

Verse 1 - I walked home from work today
well that's a lie I took the bus
it was a gorgeous day all day 
but I was stuck inside 

as soon as I finish the sun goes away 
who am I kidding it won't come back 

Chorus - Stop playing tricks on me 
show me what I wanna see
Oh Mr. Sun
I wanna be wanna be wanna be
where you are 

Verse 2 - Finally you show your face here
even if for a little while
at least I know you still exist dear
and are willing to stop by our part of town

I'd wish you'd let me know you were coming 
I'd wish you had gave me some warning 

(repeat chorus)

Verse 3 - Though you didn't stick around 
the sky's clear with a light shade of blue
oh Mr. Sun go and hide
the clouds and I don't really need you


LAME attempt at a song. . . I will admit I rushed it a bit maybe even forced it a little. but I'm off to yoga in an hour and then watching the hockey game GO CANUCKS GO!